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Design Critique 28 | a college plan

The usual Monday Criticism plan rarely comes to student plan, in particular, was happy when I received the following. The simple fact is that too was happy to be at first glance did not see a conventional building.

I do not know who was selected by lot, but I managed to find one that you can be quite difficult to integrate well. To be sure, who would create such a plot would opt for the actual installation, if not the right kind of bezárkózós, so here it is difficult to find a smooth place on it.

I received the following letter:

Dear Lord Koos!
I am a college student of architecture, building design and building subjects made ​​my opinion I would like to send. If you find it worthwhile, it can be published on the website.

The corner into the above is quite good and the crowd followed by the formation of well-built little contour area.

The floor plan is well take advantage of the benefits arising from sarokelrendezésből so different sides can be approached on foot and by car. If we interpret the drawings of the Northern signal is "upward" in the north (?). This is interesting because of the orientation space can be judged in this light.

As a student back then we also had a separate genre to create your own North, as if it was some kind of business. It was unbelievable how well we can megkomplikálni, kicifrázni this simple function symbol to a judge. But I will never forget that to be completely clear, as it is graphic statutes.

The floor plan layout - especially the front-kitchen-dining-living room combination is sufficiently generous and spacious, well-standing fireplace in the space separating the functions. Should specifically highlight the entrance, which is much more pronounced in the usual and framed, not just a door on the facade.

What these observations to separate the toilet just before the passing of the bedrooms, the family's intimate zone to be reached. I do not know the design program, but if you are not a specific claim (family) are concerned, most builders require szeparáltságot.

The other complaint I have relates to the bedroom. It is still okay, that the northern facing master bedroom, but difficult to defend the two children's rooms clean NE orientation (the one with south-eastern orientation could have been provided). The best orientation is currently in the garage, which is almost from morning through orientation, késődélutánig benapozott will .... which is not required at this helyiségnél, but not the gyerekszobáknál.

If the orientation may be reversed, that is, North is down - which is unusual, because the site layout is always portrayed that on top - then of course the above is not true.

This includes the fact that a building is exposed to so much insight, the direction of the street may be less fortunate betervezni parapet without windows. In addition hálószobákról is where the expectation is of particular importance zavartalanság. If your child's room is not from the NE, but the garage swapped places, would be aligned to the SW, then these szobáknál this problem also disappear.

Such a handsomely designed buildings - but today it is a normal family house - very often two-point demands of the garage, which would fit well here, I really should not have much to add to the existing width.

Which is clearly good, the shape of the building mass. The proportions are good, well structured and varied, perhaps too much so. Both the plan and in reality they look good in the glass block hole-like surfaces, the work has aggályosabb, such amount is already a very serious extent they should be considered an energy calculation.

Summary | students do worse than plan, good to see how they can in other ways to approach this design is both easy and difficult task. Pleasure to see this fresh, which fortunately did not go to the expense of function. The nets correct orientation and placement of the toilet of a customer to an actual consultation would very likely anyway in a few buildings and burnt after the right solution for a designer's mind. Congratulations to the plan!

If you would like to show to others in the preparation / completion of the apartment or house, or curious as to what others say about the house you like, you can send it to us , and of course, we present our opinion as to say it. If your house is not yours, but curious what others think about it, it can be submitted electronically. Discretion is because you can do all this anonymously, of course, up to the city (+ district) entering.

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10 posts in "Design Criticism 28 | a college plan"

  • Julius cams:

    Nice little house for sure! It seems to me that the flat roof solution will be the new fashion. (Or is it?)
    Which I think is a problem
    Basin is not well out of reach of the north side (street visibility, wind, etc.).
    -Living in the northern wall of glass blocks do not think an aesthetic layout, but good in other places.
    -Right in the dining hall may be overlooking.
    Kitchen-panel inverted "L" shaped part should have been a little more devoted to the bar (the bar between the column and the possibility of passing it unnecessary).
    Chamber could be a small window toward the garage.
    Too small, Laundry (washing, teregetés), the window of their owners.
    And finally, a terrace, which is not covered pergola. (Rain protection).
    Unique front and form, with good ideas. Can be a bit more seriously should you take the energy (especially architects), and then the glass block would be out of the picture. Church maintenance cost is just as important as usability.

  • Very dynamic, beautiful, and I agree with the criticism:
    - Vs. garage. children's room
    - 2 álllásos garage

    + Between the two-chamber cooling bath room could solve it better, I mean that I do not like very, very sharp and obtuse angles.

    Confinement from the street by a 2m high fagyalsövény two years to solve.

  • Many of the same observations, though not one I can identify with. This garage can not be more of a change trains and many should be added. Many plan to see 270 to 330 wide garages. If the car comes to a family, or the usual things (bikes, strollers, hoeing ...) spend their time at the wall, the plan size of a healthy minimum. There is nothing more spectacular üdítőbb when dad discovers that the baby-drawn graphics, the dream machine when pushed to the side of three-wheeled.
    This is connected to the drive to get home those shoes in hand, or pilgrimage to the hall, or the next day to look frightened, ki-/bejárat between the two.

  • Balazs Alexandra:

    Really nice design, at least for me - totally amateur - from my point of view.

    As far as a woman first spotted, the placement of the stove - I do not find very lucky, because the bustle blue-green can be the man's daughter. In addition, care must be taken in cooking heads also come forward to help children ...

    The rooms, the garage and replace or expand the garage to fit two cars. I think that the nets could be more pleasant courtyard turning the sight, like a fence, or perhaps a busy street.

    The terrace roof solution, the use of glass block, and subdivision of the building but nevertheless I like.

    If actual construction would be, everything is done to find out who this ijfú hope, because style is just ... So meet my elképzeléseimmel but just wait quietly, and place it as a favorite page ... :)

  • hmm, this is usually: I just think that covers the cold ought to forget? uncomfortable with bare feet step out of the room, then through the stone and then again in the living room floor.

    It is now possible water-resistant, abrasion-resistant parquet apply

    little things, but in everyday life is very much difference

  • Gregory Nemeth:

    First of all, thank the Lord Koos, that they had dealt with my plan, and found worthy to share the space. Nice to tervkritikáknak because there is a fundamental error in the plan, it is like to belong to the figyelmükkel dear readers, and even though it is also exposed to negative criticism, at least they can not leave him without a word, this attention and spur. Thanks again to all! (The "design")

  • apprentice:

    My message to the student as a student: cool, good house.
    But if we give the head, and a house in two axes at right angles, but slightly acute angle találkoztatsz, you should consider this meeting a much better "kihegyezni" the plan, because that point is very tense and exciting situations also arise in a "töketlenkedés" is that it pushes into the radiator in the corner.
    Other ecological really not too much glass, brick, and too many wall corner, protruding-buy. Whatever the structure is very much in the house, every corner bridge between heat, which is not ideal for the whole house heat balance terms.

    In addition, most students in my plan is much weaker in the end result, if a bold attempt to square the kimozdítani raszterből the house. Congratulations to him! Well you obviously learned a lot from it, all of my students after the completion of my plan a couple of months I realized what could have been different, much better solution. That a developmental process was such a good house, it can rightly be happy.

  • Uncle Szabo:

    Yeah, cool, good house. The hálótraktust but rotated approximately 180 °. The entrance is next to a dark and twisted shit master bedroom instead of a much better place to have sanitary toilets, and even the guests would be in place. The coldest corner of the garage should be subjected to more of the cars do not deserve. The released NE, SW area (water / communicating garage) would fit nicely szeparáltabb 3, sunnier and garden! bedroom. Maybe even the kitchen kideréxögelendő :-)

  • meregzsakk:

    Very nice design, the above deficiencies can be eliminated if they do not build from a small plot should (then), the price of five was used a few things from it!
    In addition, flat-roofed :-)

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