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Dear Nicholas Koos!
I would like to ask you to critique our plan to take down the website.
I accept your criticism and thank you for taking the time out.
Sincerely, W. B.
10/15/2009
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Author: Nicholas Koos | 2009. October. 12th | Read 3.303
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Nicholas to be true! The building is best located premises wasted garage with a crime. You may not like the back of the garage, or do not want the street to kitárulkozni?
Otherwise, I like the layout, but the entire house should be turned 90 degrees!
As young couple is involved, so the question that only a child would want to? Because it is difficult to establish yet another room. The people employed could be, but from the "nursery" and the bathroom is quite far.
The rear (east) wall of glass block is a lot?
The site orientation is of course unfortunate, but it would be impossible for the living room light juttani if we remember the tradition that the house be divided tent roof to protect from the sun and that unused attic is also a necessary part of the house. Of course, the required angle and roof shapes and building height complicates the matter.
The sunlight in these tests can be loaded into the software (otherwise freely available) terrain model? I know that this is a flat country, there is very little in substance.
Nothing wrong with the site given. Just in case, only the house after the garage should be ready. The kids love the land anyway, playing in the grass, the ball does not roll, do not roll the bike in cold, damp, with the clothes you will sit down, kneel ... to automatically clean, dry pavement choice. Now, if the viacolor example. front of the house would be an ideal choice in mind from the inside would be a good, large playground. The bedroom / gyerexobák it could be a much better orientation. I think everyone saw American movies where the garage is also behind the building, located at the rear and did not mind.
This will of course be reconsidered in the relationship between rooms (entrance-living room-bedroom unit block) which is of course re-planning. The young couple, I wish to have long term substantial income, such as a house of this size and design of high energy demand will be.
Without knowing the location can not be said clearly that to be the house, because we are not attributable to the immediate vicinity: the busy street, industrial activity, etc. ...?
Thanks for the comments so far.
And yes we are planning a child, but this is not now :) 
And we want a pool, so the left front of the garage. For now we are left in the garden and what we can use. He has also, unfortunately, we were able to clear the house will not be h, we chose this compromise. And many of the aforementioned lines also took the opportunity to: (
Unfortunately, site plan did not send.
Laszlo Molnar is right that did not want kitárulkozni towards the street, we wanted a solution that back into the house on the property, but this is due to a ground wire running - you can not be built - not possible. Glass bricks will be, but not so much
Szabo Uncle! We have children yet, but if you will think I can keep an eye on the back patio, and will remain for him a large garden. I recall that I loved playing in the grass
We are looking forward to all criticism. I wonder what they think the layout if you do not see the sunlight. So it is too light ..
somewhat academic question, since it is not possible to dissociate benapozástól because it is one of the most important component of the church, not depressing, dark as a child in a dark room and living room. I do not know ama some lines exactly where it lies and how much should be back to take the house to avoid it, but I've planned a house, which was such an orientation, and certainly the owner realized rather be back, but to-day.
Those who lived his life day home, for all can not imagine what a SOTER apartment living?
Believe in arms is not nobody bad, is impossible, but it's essential. If one would foghíjtelek, closed-row installation, there are records in stone carved in the options, but here is a new family house to talk about.
three things:
three things:
- To-day
- Do not tárulkozzon out
- Location of the site
NOT compatible. One has to go ... I do not agree with the decision, but I have a lot I did not have to ....
Anyway, the kitchen is still killer in the wrong place ...
Who would make the garage end of the yard, I do not understand it let alone 30 years, Dad was also in town at the other end of the garage, including the car, and half an hour is elbiciklizni him when we traveled. Just now another life ...
I for example. Every day cruising (because I have to ...) - and I hated it when the back was the garage for the morning-evening gate opens kapuzár 2x, a small door-open-close, this 3x-and-out counter, sometimes havatlapátolni etc ... when our own designed to the street , house with garage built some strength criterion was ...
Of course, tastes ...
Only now I noticed h. posztnál someone comes up with every second ...
Not necessarily incompatible, if the kitchen-living room-dining room south wall is higher than usual and more than half a meter along the top of a vertical row of windows, or if the attic rooms with an open (flat) roof windows illuminate. But here starts the roof design and the initial condition. Or not rectangular housing.
The 50 square meters of car commuting to me too much, but still comfortable kapunyitogatás motorization issue.
The layout of the response starting my own point of view. There is no doubt will not be anxious in the house, a three-member family in mind for me it's a little overwhelming, not the room size I think is big, but somehow Ösztöndíjasaink think the flying parts especially in the kitchen and the dining in, sure you can fix this a little bit to save space in . I'd love to love the pool is large or small house living spaces and want to finally break out of it. The chamber and the maximum size of the pantry, I agree, but I think the kitchen is too large, U-shaped kitchen, at the smaller more practical solution for all fingertips and not have to do extra kilometers. For me, the kitchen is too far from the living room, it almost loses the essence of the open kitchen, because it will be a little isolated from the családdtól because of the distance and the child will not be overlooking.
I do not know what you want to use the garage in the wardrobe, but if you have coats, shoes ... I think it is more practical if egybenyitnák the windbreak, so even where you are coming out of the house can not be keresgetni the shoes, bag ...
The inner hall toilet at the function does not really understand this one, the other is, why it is so far away from the spa. Who was in the bathroom and you realize the need for uncomfortable kimennie from the toilet, the bathroom would be more practical in the entrance hall section, because it is too close to each other in two rooms and they are separated. Overall, the bath part taken out of the north corner side could use a wardrobe room, or vice versa, and her face would be two rooms in the northern east-west side of the kitchen enters the living room and a covered terrace to forget that clarification of the house, although I know in this case that this is not a concern.
Nicholas összehányni pondering criticism I took the liberty of a proposed solution (Koósza doodle ™) - nothing expensive background lurkers, not entirely léptékhelyesen:
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http://hawaii.extra.hu/koos.hu/Tervkritika_47.jpg
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Description of the key phrases:
- Front Street garage and house were connected, but out of the thermal zone.
- One (the entrance to the garage and common) windbreak in many limiter, comfortable clothing options. Garage with storage room and the toilet is easily accessible (I think there will be handwashing facilities, and engineering)
- Cross-site windows in the kitchen and 3 + room with natural lighting and orientation problem of dissolving a 'closed garden' (can not think that's called a closed inner courtyard surrounded by four walls). Allows you to have breakfast, dress teregetni, or if the third kid room, the kids can play in the courtyard, while the kitchen can keep an eye on.
- Kitchen island kitchen (perhaps that's just my fetish).
- Living room gets light from the south, west and north remained in the garden can also contact the covered terrace.
- Separate intimate zone (3 bedrooms, bath, sauna, dressing, toilet)
- The plant kocsibeállótól wall street and the isolation of the south front yard / garden ornament.
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Be stoned, but avoid personal injury, only a very small pebbles and dull, and only in my absence.
At last, someone who is "paper" checks the ideas. I prefer Hawaii raw veziója than the original. Interesting and useful solution would be to think of the enclosed garden and the kitchen would be a normal-sized window. All I would change it to block the intimate turn 90 degrees to the third room should not be so isolated.
I support the proposal that critics of the plan should be good examples of parallel arguments extolling series is also supported. (Mainly because I have also raised the demand
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An "intimate block ... turn 90 degrees to the third room should not be so isolated. "
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Exactly how you thought?
You now do not require the window areas (closets, sauna) are half inside the house, the rooms and bathrooms in the northern and southern rear garden courtyard 'faces'.
And let's not ignore that the intimate zone léptékhelyesen drawn more towards the north-south elongated rectangular rather than square, so the road IMHO. expedient is orientated east-west direction, because it involved a shorter, more room on the other hand, the two sides of recovery.
Of course, I support, but do not give the author of this blog has a new job if you have already run this free public service. Anyone (possibly because designers) can start a (multiple authorship) new blog, the work started at zero, in addition to filling the content is not much more, because a link is only offer horse words.
Dear mB!
We would be honored if the plans of the house you like to comment.
I am interested in your opinion.
has made criticism of the plan is working, if somebody knows a good house, and gladly leközlöm "megkritizálom", but I do not felkutatásukra the apparatus, nor a sea of my time there.
The layman is made, whichever is primarily for those who are ill fate as architects brought together people who are not about heights, but most of all for those who can not really decide if you received one at all up to the mark or not? We as professionals is so trivial that you do not know many people imagine that some people do not even know how to catch him.
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The tervkritikának not intended to be sort of crash course to teach anyone to design, not so much so that if you do not seem to architect's drawings are made, off the bat even refuses.
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The submitted plans for a significant proportion of tervkritikára unfortunately felt that, although you call yourself an architect, most of it should be right, because the size of "environmental pollution" produce.
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The profession is "higher regions", but the chamber itself does not care about this and I do not know if such a "poor relatives", and so are present in substantial numbers, if you like the houses realized they were listed on a major part of ..
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so looking forward to the good plans of houses, we can give them space.
Dear Mr. Koos!
I found an interesting article: http://gondola.hu/cikkek/67614
Unfortunately I can not suddenly to me to write, but perhaps the tervkritikában could deal with it (I would not take long to get the drawings), or the authorities in the section dealing with could be a little better explore the things that you could deal with it (of course I know that you Time is precious ...). Would be very interested in the details .... And maybe you prefer a separate article "beavatottabb" speakers as well ...
Welcome
Odor in the house was designed by Thomas and the architect back then board "was walking around enough" (there is also visualization):
http://www.epiteszforum.hu/node/10836
It is certain that this house will travel a lot. Why be so separated from the intimate zone? Toilet in space? This is a two-family house. Overwhelming will of the many doors.
I can see that the dining ablakpillérei insulated reinforced concrete columns 30's? Brave people.
Hawaii also szakajtónyi solving problems, but to me all the way sympathetic.
The toilets will be at a door. Otherwise, I do not understand why it would be a lot of the number of doors?
mB, I agree. Very common and expensive, but at least poor construction as well.
The plan includes road or six. This is a two-bedroom building dolgozós funny lot. Offices have not go that far. For example, the dining and kitchen space is a big nothing. But we also need to build and kifűteni because heat loss is up nicely. The bedrooms are virtually no large opening from the living room. The szeparálatlanság later may be uncomfortable. The living room is not only dark but also the porch of the dining area is overshadowed by that then The more and get less sun.
Kitchen-dark kitchen. Great pity. A new green-field investment of such a thing should not be planned.
The windows 150/150-es "terror" is not edifying. Each wall which is slightly more compact, whoop, puncture a százötvenperszázötvenessel. So many doors and can even create!
The garage is senselessly wide. The best place to take from the living. There will not be stored in places where it is needed, but also between the two cars. Unless the requirement that the two cars arrive simultaneously POINT and POINT to the garage to both cars on both sides of all the doors have opened.
What is the front garden? What is bad is not it better that way in order to take advantage of the orientation?
Many articles to find the energy awareness. It is also absolutely not in the plan.
I suggest perhaps the kitchen is pulling farther ablakossá also be made which would be normal. The dining room is pulled deeper into the frontal plane and in front of the terrace would be more practical, functional relations would come up. Not árnyékolná the living room, you should not áttálalni diagonally through the living room to the terrace.
Of course, this is very much a sure loss fércelgetni the current plan.
lay people about the blog, but apparently practicing architects will also contribute. They are certainly able to present their completed terveikből szemezgetve (as the blog author did) that what they want the builder, what were the conditions and what was in it. Can see that the good examples of the laity.
Szabo Uncle?
mB?
nope not unless you have too much of it as spam by Akismet
Dear Bettina, Uncle Szabo responded. A lot of doors because of the many small hole. Unnecessary. Planning negligence.
The World Cup seems to uninsulated columns do not bother anyone?
MB has. Why should idehozni other examples on this board? There will also be discussed. This is mostly present at the planning stage houses. The presentation of the plan, or pride, or uncertain. Therefore, it is. A blog about trying to focus on the lack of design. (Szerintem.) A good plan will tell everyone? Combos bevállalni would be the development of visual culture. (Szerintem.) huh?
Exemplary design houses criticism? Funny genre. But now that I'm taking my linkgyűjteményére good houses, here and register to start a blog. True, but it works good job, but did not publish houses were present, including one with organizing are asked to go out to shoot, ask for a plan, an appropriate style.
kepesj: I could. But that's not the point, respectively. here I'm just a guest on it.
BLO: the insulated world championship. column is replaced by classifying elements. This should be the biggest problem here :-)
I'm sorry that as an outsider belekotyogok, but I csináltatnék a PHPP calculation (which is so far mainly passive houses use, traditional house really would be nice), what cost can be heated in this lot, west, north and north-east facing windows with broken-line houses.
It would be nice to have a plan to see what the professionals commends, but the question arose in my mind that what I could learn it if my other sites located in other desires, other material with frames I have ... etc?
Too bad it is not a private person may tender to the house of his own design. Then you could be up and mazsolázgatni hasonlítgatni. Surely even a layman in terms of perceived quality and less difference between the quality of work, and maybe not so many are taken by you was wrong house. So the customer would be well, and the architect letisztulna society, because the good remain "alive".
criticism of the plan was already in a terrible building, which I raised in relation to the builders to advertise in the koos.hu via a mini-tender plan and a public discussion, choose from the plans. First it bent and then withdrawn. But it would have been instructive experiment.
Uncle Szabo: If you want to display to illustrate, I used to Bettina and the question meant, but I regretted it, after all, why should you know.
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Private house building online public contest? Tanúlságos? More revelatory.
It is not criticism, but also appreciation. To explain why it is good. There is a need. Someone has to start with.
mB, epiteszforum.hu nice collection of links, and there with pictures, basic drawings, descriptions, forum. But then, what you miss most if it exists? They are the architects / builders can send it here?
Many people wonder why there is a lot of bad design. Well very simple, because the young people in general, no money, he can loan up to a big cut to build or not. Which are linked to here, not just the average Hungarian People's available plans. Instead of those of whom live in the well-known architects. Not bad or ugly houses planned, I think.
Little starting capital + credit, ergo worth considering what the people give their money. Where to save "fastest", back in the plans. That's why there is a frog's ass down to the level below. What is demand, we will also supply. But I would not say no to a lot of money if we pay for it, you'd better, because it is not certain. The architect made a lot of high school, who are poor they design houses, but they do not care, a job for them, what letudnak. I think houses are well planned, well who love what they do and I think it hurts you, you see, if they were ...
This type of error, that the good expensive house for sure. Good examples are very often you see raw concrete surfaces, used brick exterior, flat roofs, but surely a simple roofs, the layout is surprisingly simple and the area is normal.
Bad design is because it is a good example of tradition and the environment without knowing the type seen in our plans, we are building now most of the 60's tent-roofed frame house of mediterránosított version.
Dear An, the plan is about whether the site and the future needs of residents knowing what solutions you can propose it to the architect. Specifically, not just in general. What you learn from this? I think a lot.
Nicholas, this is a very good idea! Since anonymous, fictitious Nekeresden also be sure the area is to be agreed?
BLO: small family house may be, is a private tervpályáztatás for the customer. The online is not possible, because the personal relationship and orientation is extremely important for all tervezgetés before. For example, in tune with each other can? Does the designer understands the builder's personality, desire, or. the builder is responsible for the design conceived by the interpreter to rationality?
mB, I would question the list. They are very expensive buildings, often self-serving aggression form. Quite a lineup diet egyrugóra associated narrow circle. Unfortunately I think that shows we mean the best example of a list of odd, is not hazánkból.
Sorry if I misunderstood, I welcome the idea of an online public contest, if we could develop a system to revolutionize the magánépítkezést.
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Moreover, where you fit into one's house is 20M financing of the project?
I am very happy to be followed visually architects 'good' housing plans were published except in the form of links.
Immediately take the first one ( http://epiteszforum.hu/node/14199 , acéltornácos house) a few comments as an outsider layman, and I apologize if a solution could not understand what you have architects can learn from the first year:
I like the appearance of the house, the brick pavement, an indicative and a good rhythm and the side windows from the street. I think a very good south-facing windows, which the 'porch' overshadow the summer, but allow the winter sun.
I do not understand that a quasi-square plot 'long' designed house, which does not force anything, but the elongated rectangular disadvantages (eg, traveling on a relatively large surface, since the smaller bathroom space in front is not the same wardrobe, you have two doors and window it, bag-like bathroom, large surface-volume ratio, etc.). suffer.
I have a little lacking in such a large house with a separate toilet as well.
Good if the postman immediately to enter the living room?
What I wonder is, how it is heated to the living room into a cold, overcast winter day?
(The pictures just a radiator, I see a large window area below is recessed heat emitters. All floor heating? But the large windows inappropriate. The fireplace? Is, unfortunately, is very energy inefficient heating and use of such a quality house for regular use due to dirt because of questionable)
The long house is south window of each room, this is a huge advantage. 75% more than the south wall is matched by an equivalent square meter would be the case, but only 15% larger in circumference. Plenty worth it if the shape and location of the site allows.
no, no.
only, as I have earlier mentioned, the Akismet spam filter to block some comments from time to time (eg one time. the mail free of charge, or such. in which many of the reference) and the machine until it is close by, I will not be allowed to continue. The filter system is, unfortunately, is not fine tuned, but teachable ....
MB: Maybe I misunderstood. I did not want nor rage, nor elicit smiling. Aggressive forms can be a sports car, which will still be as nice. Personally, I relied on the majority of buildings can not be accepted. For me, a very intensive, school, magyarosch neobauhaus. Toolbox narrow build. Often, the economy is treated as a third-rate considerations in favor of the formal solutions. They only seem simple at first glance to. But one can not summarily express an opinion, because some of the series, only the sentence fit. Let me not to analyze in detail all the solutions, because the sides could amount to a building.
Those who can not see, can not see. I will not be an entirely different theme for organizing elements into the tangle.