Design Critique 51 | The first plan
On New Year's Plan Critique a colleague first starting his career plan related to:
Dear Lord Koos!
I am sending this as an architect I have committed two-storey family house in inner-city plan for criticism. I'm new to the profession, recently graduated, and this is one of the first plan.
The site is relatively modest-sized, twin-mounted married and already had in building a cellar remained, so I had to manage adottságként. (This is designated a quasi-load bearing walls of a part of site)
The client, a young couple with small children. The family is expected to increase in the future, this design also had to be considered. The street facing the garage door and the two even had clients request that a small part of the larger sites to be green. The street is quiet, low traffic, so the favorable orientation of the house to the street less intimate part turns. The greater than 90 degrees, obtuse-angled L shape can thus be explained.
The plan forms the basis of all clear the building. The construction has already begun, so it is no longer possible to change it, I'm really curious about the opinion of the
Thanks, Zoltan Lukátsovics raj.zoltan @ gmail.com
To get started, he managed to perform a deep water jump, because the basement walls that remain, such conditions is not really a design inspiration, all topped by the small site and the twin housing construction. So not easy to start, but that was the end of the article előrerohanjak good solutions.
Basement
Ennyiből of course, not much can be determined, but I have often faced a client request that something be maintained, to have everything adjusted to take on a lot of compromise, and the design progresses, suddenly was not required, but will have all the compromises ingrained. I am afraid here is a small wine cellar to maintain the whole concept was to build around.
Ground floor
The conditions - as in the beginning I really was not ideal, however, the layout is not very well displayed. The sloping walls like they could be a kind of design concept and seeing the results of the final result gyanakodnának few that behind (or more precisely below) are held in basement walls.
The many terraces, shared entrance is refused, is often an especially good choice for this function to combine the two. Here it is shown (two doors next to each other maybe an exaggeration). The living room with patio doors to a better removal of furnishings, while simultaneously contact the terrace is not really lost, we are more in the kitchen-terrace contact in relation to this solution is even better, as it got closer to each other.
Good kitchen-dining-living room link, you only have so much comment that such an arrangement would benefit the dining room, when some interior solution can be connected to something, because it floats in space enough.
Attic
Good placement of the stairs was a good floor plan designed as a minimum corridor area, while the nets and is well approximated by the pool. Neither the floor nor in the attic did not result in disadvantages from the fact that the twin housing construction due to one side completely without windows.
What I would only complain about the approach to the storage room. Was probably due to the parental bedroom and opened the közlekedőből. Other than that everything is in place.
Summary | builders certainly no small risk to themselves, when a young engaged in the design of their house, as is commonly thought, the more experienced can only be good for them to design a house. There is also a good rebuttal. If someone has such a good beginning to his career and can make rational decisions during the design and the result is an all round form, only to congratulate you.
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Author: Nicholas Koos | 2010. January. 4th | Read 5.084
Category: this is my house
Tags: semi-detached house , Lukátsovics Z. , criticized the plan
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I love it. Like to move into
Optimum size, useful and livable spaces developed. Let's say it this way the cellar does not see much use, but the heart of the right builder. You will want, but at all costs?
Beautiful, stylish, can be used.
(I am a white plaster frame around the windows problems, but basically a very nice house.)
The western corner of the living room of the little precipitation is why? Of course, I can see, there are also changes pavement, struck parts of the tree has been dumped, but this odd little megbonyolítása with the form, so you do not even fit into the cellar. But is there a reason to be.
For my part to move with it.
What is attractive: looks like the drawings. Well-developed elevations, floor plans, sections.
So congratulations to the first plan!
Join me in the solos. I would like to move into.
The color and the world beyond the pavement element 'widescreen' windows can be very pleasing.
Granular attractive interiors and the stylish appearance!
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I assume you have a boiler in the basement, next to the sleeping room in the home solar panels / solar collectors to serve, and also functions as a wardrobe.
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One comment and one question is formulated in me. I think it is worth thinking about on the ground floor, in front of the garage next to the polygonal protrusions (the stairs next to the line of insulated walls) shower fürdővé / mosókonyhává shaping. On the one hand the number of rooms, on the other hand, do not necessarily have to go upstairs.
The leak would not have been practical in the walls poppe drained away? * Fejvakarós-smiley *
The home town really would be better to approach the gallery. If you still have also feleződne the size of the parents' bedroom could also open a wardrobe. The accessibility of the current stage and gives it more importance than it should be.
The stove I hope it is not the final, but there has been drawn, because the edge of the counter is not acceptable.
I hope the garden will never be needed to sort a small truck, it only works Hassel stone will be solved.
These little things are nice except for the plan. The western façade of the two large windows, say, could have been one under the other, but that's really just hurts my eyes.
Nice plan, but this would be the average Hungarian family home. I was just too much front-traveling disturbance, 23m2 living room ... one of the dining room but can not use anything else, "arrivals only", the szélfogót also miss. The next step is seemingly useless space, but enough is too high. Such a house in such a small plot in space, for a sense of saving me.
By far the best plan so far are ...
Ajánlanék three things for consideration. Each more taste / personal preference issue, and I think (at least 2) is half-way access into ...
- At least one terrace to deliver an ordinary door, which does not soak into. Such as a summer storm has not completely close to the house ... If the problem of solar access, polycarbonate mehene still ...
- On the ground floor to the rear patio door: I would be sliding door to the kitchen to be more distant half of the opening. Then étkezóasztal odaférne about the hanging bar next to the traffic lane separated from the dining room and living room. + Would remain in place at the fireplace ...
- At the entrance to the fireplace opening narrower farther noted that the resulting corner / wall of a normal előszobafal / wardrobe fit. Anyway, IMHO it does not matter at all, if a normal-sized lobby is like a family of four dresses at a time, or guests are coming, a 6-8 m2 hall soon to be disturbingly low bir (especially now in winter
I do not think h is feasible, but my garage for that matter, the smaller part of the rear wall of vollna brought into the middle of the hall now, so you could have a nice garage ... kétbeállós
Anyway, in agreement with one of the solos in front of me: to let out a little better I think, should lógatni.
Good plan, but I notice little things are still to be addressed mönnyen. Most of all contacts and bútorozhatóságban.
The TV is the place to review the day before the glass wall. There one way or the TV or the glass wall is unnecessary. It would be nice to see these two important átbútorozva space. Consideration of the day-co-separation of the entrance is beautiful with the background, but for example. the recent severe cold, the door is a very uncomfortable spot ANAGEMENT hsznált the most interior space. If you do not, within a year there will be curtains.
The terrace like entrance, an excellent solution.
Really an exaggeration, however, the two doors at the entrance terrace. However, to the place it would fit more wardrobe is a family's house. Not to mention the unnecessary loss of heat by the glass. The track starts in the life hereafter illustrates the start of the furniture. Anyone who lives alone, he would not think of a spacious kitchen with a stove at a free end of the line so to put down.
Parents' bedroom above the multi-step laundry room is very comfortable. Among the many stairs instead férhetne furniture there, which is desirable because it is absolutely excluded from it. In addition, the room full of machines as well as disturbing. financially sound. Just a few steps away from the top would open the same amount of stairs közlekedőből. In addition, more space would be teregetéshez, ironing. Architects like this every day, it is essential lifestyle moments neglected. Funny how the smallest room is open to the second bathroom. Impairing the bútorozhatóságát well. It will be great to get out of the bath? The TV room just above the normal design because there is no window. The headroom in the gables állmagasságba unpleasant. Only to look down. In the next room solution would be welcome here as well. Attic-szellőztethetőség airbag. For this reason, the strange intimacy opposite parental panoramic bathroom. Today, fashion ledge without épületkubus. The Estonian of the day of trends outside the room is difficult to bring up other benefits. Notwithstanding the above, congratulations, because (I think) might consider this an excellent addition to trivia house.
Excellent house. Congratulations. I do not write about little things, just because it would be heckling. The elaborate presentation of the exemplary way. Only those standards should work. Thank you.
I think the two doors to the terrace is not bad. If you already glass to the ground, why not be open as well? So summer is practically adjoining the terrace and the dining-hall, it can be very pleasant. And because it does not matter in the foreground or larger, such as here in the summer. children playing area can be opened to the terrace. Heverhet or so people in the deck chair, that the sun does not fire him because he was "in", but the double patio doors kitárható and caresses of the summer breeze.
Hmmm. Tasty. 
The front door beside the double doors and completely unnecessary. In addition, do not produce light anywhere. Upon entering the lobby but could use a lot more loading space. Nice thing about the most optimal approximation (= optimal) life situation and weather (= pleasant carefree summer afternoons relaxing sipping an island), but usually not the case. You should count on a rainy decemberrel damp, cold, windy márciussal well. From more than one.
Of course, if you consider the general design principles, it must be right, Uncle Szabo.
Easy to use, what is good, summer, autumn, spring, winter, winter in a frost-tender of the housewife, but light-demanding plants. 
But obviously not accidentally drawn into the architecture of a double door, so it can be assumed that it was a requirement of the user side. Me for example. do not like the Hungarian construction practices that himself up, an ant does not exceed the threshold, I'm much more open outward. We generally have no temporary space now, or I'm out, or inside. Yet earlier in Hungary there were large open or glazed verandas, which very well could be used, and no one feared the hőhídtól.
Obviously this is not porch, but it seems to me to discover in and out of the flattening of the demand, and this is good.
Get a reassuring answer to the question, anyway I should advocate for the designer and / or the sponsor as well.
You might expect this is perversion, especially in winter, but I love the big bottles when the wind blows out there and wear the rain / snow / leaves.
I like your plan! And in addition to giving you much ...
I hope so, statically also ok (will be), because the walls, roof stability of 'sight! "Somewhat critical of the roof.
I am the enemy has become fashionable these days glued fugázatlan stone covering. Nice. but only the rich can afford! (A few years later settled in the vegetation, mostly weeds, no frost in the beginning then potyogni!
The good points are not even write, many have elsorolták.
Which is formulated as a critique (and not only design but also the direction of education):
why do only straight partitions designed the rooms? Between the two rooms váéaszfal "Z" shape falfülkéket get Deep-great. for cabinets.
This interior design point of view, it would be extremely beneficial!